[FMA Fic] Like a Radio Drama- Part One
Feb. 15th, 2011 09:32 amWhen I agreed with Roy that I would write some stories for him, I didn't expect one of them to be this long, oi. This story will be in two parts. Roy's cursive handwriting.
Title: Like a Radio Drama
Author/Artist:
bay115
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Rating: R to NC-17
Paring: Roy/Riza
Warnings: Sex (of course), some angst, assassination attempt, story taking a AU turn. Spoilers for ending of manga and Brotherhood anime. Blind!Roy gets a special mention too, heh.
Word Count: 13,020 ← This is why I don’t do romances often, folks. >.>;
Summary: Roy is determined to move forward despite being blind. He and Riza are working together on restoring Ishval, which will soon lead the lieutenant being his eyes.
Author’s Note 1: For
springkink February 15 prompt: Fullmetal Alchemist (Roy/Riza)- Roy never got his sight back, but he still ended up with Riza- You can be my eyes.
As I already mentioned, this is AU, so this took some planning. The scoop: Roy didn’t get his eyesight back and is still Colonel, Grumman is Fuhrer, Ed and Al are like what happened at the end of manga/Brotherhood.
Sorry to the prompter that you didn’t expect this to be long. Plot bunnies love me, haha. First time doing romance and an intimate scene, so comments on what I did wrong and how I can fix the mistakes are appreciated. Real quick readers, PLEASE let me know how I did blind!Roy. My beta and I looked over this piece, but I’m sure we still made a few mistakes in which a “he gazed”, “he looked”, etc. has been slipped. If so, let me know.
There’s more I want to say, but I’ll save those at the end. You’re all here for the smut with plot (or plot with smut, whatever fancies you), right? :P Betaed by the lovely and fierce
lalikaa .
( Part One )
Title: Like a Radio Drama
Author/Artist:
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Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Rating: R to NC-17
Paring: Roy/Riza
Warnings: Sex (of course), some angst, assassination attempt, story taking a AU turn. Spoilers for ending of manga and Brotherhood anime. Blind!Roy gets a special mention too, heh.
Word Count: 13,020 ← This is why I don’t do romances often, folks. >.>;
Summary: Roy is determined to move forward despite being blind. He and Riza are working together on restoring Ishval, which will soon lead the lieutenant being his eyes.
Author’s Note 1: For
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As I already mentioned, this is AU, so this took some planning. The scoop: Roy didn’t get his eyesight back and is still Colonel, Grumman is Fuhrer, Ed and Al are like what happened at the end of manga/Brotherhood.
Sorry to the prompter that you didn’t expect this to be long. Plot bunnies love me, haha. First time doing romance and an intimate scene, so comments on what I did wrong and how I can fix the mistakes are appreciated. Real quick readers, PLEASE let me know how I did blind!Roy. My beta and I looked over this piece, but I’m sure we still made a few mistakes in which a “he gazed”, “he looked”, etc. has been slipped. If so, let me know.
There’s more I want to say, but I’ll save those at the end. You’re all here for the smut with plot (or plot with smut, whatever fancies you), right? :P Betaed by the lovely and fierce
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